I am an 8th grade writer who loves to play soccer and believes in fighting for what you think is right. I look forward to writing for you.
Wednesday, October 12, 2011
Michael Vey Book Review
Tuesday, October 11, 2011
The Flower Garden's Style
This story is broken into two sections. The one at the beginning is about friendship and the other is about distrust, fear, and hatred. I am noticing that the author of this story (also the author of The Lottery) has used this same kind of structure/style for both of his stories. This is no coincidence; it is simply his style.
This style that the author uses is a kind of trickery. For the whole of the beginning, he leads you with good fortune, trust, happiness, and friendliness. But the story then takes a shocking twist toward distrust and anger that you wouldn't really expect, but that is how he keeps you interested. One example of Mrs. Winning's friendliness to Mrs. MacLane is a quote from the story. The author writes, "As the weather grew warmer and the first signs of green showed on the trees and on the wet ground, Mrs. Winning and Mrs. MacLane became better friends. They met almost daily at the grocery and walked up the hill together..." The author comes out completely saying that Mrs. Winning and Mrs. MacLane are becoming better friends. Now this quote appears on page 114 of the story. This is relatively the beginning of the story so you can see how the author leads you in the beginning with happiness, friendship, and trust. But then as the story continues, they seem to grow farther and farther apart to the point that they are just neighbors, nothing more. At the very end of the story, the author writes, "Mrs. MacLane waved and called out, Hello! Mrs. Winning swung around without speaking and started, with great dignity, back up the hill toward the old Winning house." As you can see, at the very end of the story, Mrs. Winning even refuses to converse with Mrs. MacLane and simply walks away. They are obviously no longer friends, proving my point.
Thursday, September 29, 2011
Using Simplicity to Refine our Lives
Using Simplicity to Refine our Lives
Wooyoung Kim
Leonardo Da Vinci once said “Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication.” Simplicity can make you feel higher than someone else in an urbane sort of way. As dictionary.com defines it, simplicity means absence of luxury and ornaments. To give up luxury for someone else can make you as sophisticated as Da Vinci.
But sophistication in a person can also mean refinement. Albert Einstein once said, “The whole of science is nothing more than a refinement of everyday thinking.” Refinement is its own reward, in many ways. Refinement can help make someone feel more welcome by letting you focus on them more. Refinement also lets you focus on what matters more. All in all, refinement is a big part of simplicity.
But simplicity, more broadly is an attitude, a way of life. Living simply earns you respect from your friends and family. Yet simplicity requires maturity, an attitude acquired after years of life and experience. Simplicity must be obtained over time and experience, not given. I have found a video that really shows how simplicity can demonstrate our refinement in our everyday lives. http://www.values.com/inspirational-stories-tv-spots/82-Taxi
This week’s query is: How can we use simplicity to make our lives more refined?
Thursday, September 22, 2011
What I think Simplicity means
9/21 homework
Monday, September 19, 2011
This I Believe
I believe in fighting for what you think is right. I believe in being yourself, following you heart, and doing what you think is right. My friend and I always argue about who is right or wrong. And these aren’t about the important things like politics and global warming but about whose sandwich is better or who got the better score on one videogame out of a million that we’ve played in our lifetime. Sure we’re friends but that doesn’t mean I will just let him be right all the time. I always feel the need to fight for what I think is right. These things are pretty stupid and aren’t really worth the argument yet this is the place where my beliefs started.
This is around the time when 9/11 occurred. I remember the day. I was just sitting in my den watching TV when it came on the news. Back then I really didn’t understand what was going on; yet now when I look back, I see that as the first time my belief was tested. Although this act of terrorism was horrible, I kept thinking that Al Qaeda was fighting for what they believe in. In the harshest retrospect they were following my belief. I was confused and I didn’t know what to think. Was I someone who respected Al Qaeda? But now I realize that I didn’t have to believe they were doing the right thing. Every belief has a limit.
As more wars break out around the globe, my belief is tested again and again. Are we wrong to kill the enemy just because we think we are right? But I always think to myself there is a difference between killing for fear and killing to protect. I feel that there will always be doubt and confusion in your life but you should always push through it and follow your heart out of the mist. And no matter how many people important or not, disagree with you, always ignore them and fight for what you think is right. This I believe.